This is some good stuff--perhaps some of the best I've seen in a very long time!
However, being the type of person who pays great attention to detail, I've only one thing to nitpick about:
Imprints, depressions, and stamps appear backwards from the thing that left them. Unless it says TOIV on the bottom of his shoe, that is, the shoe's imprint left on the truck is inaccurate.
Don't take it the wrong way--constructive criticism and critical attention to detail makes an awesome flash artist even better! Keep up the great work!
I didn't find this flash very interesting. Overall, I found it rather dull. The visuals weren't very eye-catching at all. The mix of text only and text with voice over is actually something I'd toss into the "awful" bin. There were mispellings and grammatical errors all over the place. In some places, the voices were rather soft and/or unintelligible.
To be fair, I'll give you the fact that you made something that's better than what cannon fodder usually appears late-night.
Find some VAs. Friends love helping out.
Get someone to proofread your work--it doesn't matter if you're an English major or if you sucked at the subject in school; get someone else to go through and proofread it. Nothing says "I'm stupid" better than an article with noticable errors.
Improve the visuals. The colors used for character elements were rather unappealing and often clashed harshly. You may want to reconsider the shaping of the eyes used--it looked rather awkward. If you're going to animate mouths/lipsync, please don't use just the teeth. It looks halfassed.
This review might seem a bit harsh, but considering that I usually don't comment on people who don't try at all (the really bad) and people who don't have to try (the really good), I guess that you should take this as one of the constructive criticism reviews. I think you can go far and do better, just keep at it and don't become complacent.
Exactly what every parent tries to teach their children--because it sounds so CUTE, dammit! :D
I'm impressed, and I'm a rather picky gamer.
The controls are simple but allows for a rather wide array of ability. The sound is pretty good (though I cried at the Megaman voice when he jumps) and the visuals are decent, and the gameplay is pretty close to the actual Super Smash Bros. games.
You've managed to capture the original spirit of the SSB game, and I wound up playing this for hours on end when I first got a hold of it. I'm rather impressed; this extremely picky gamer gives this flash game a gold seal of approval and two and a half thumbs up.
Normally I'll pass over Flash games as I get tired of them easily. This one got tired of me first (I played it so long it somehow managed to crash IE!).
But there's a glitch. You can still get points by clicking the head of the boss even after you lose your last life.
Fixed. Thanks for the info. :)
This is one of the best tracks I've heard on Newgrounds--and trust me, I browse through a lot of music here. Why isn't this on the top of the charts?
Scratch that--why isn't this on the FM air waves?!
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